From our Feedback from the audience we gathered that the areas that need to be addressed are:
-Improvement on the synopsis.
- The impact the sidekick has in our opening sequence. How he will fit in the opening sequence.
- More detail in the death of his parents.
-The personality of the main protagonist contrasting with the sidekick character.
-To edit the synopsis so that it will make more sense, and will explain the death of the protagonist's parents and the impact of the sidekick character.
- Change the personality of the main character and the sidekick so they do not have the same personality, but instead contrast.
- To find a name for the main protagonist as well as the sidekick character.
-Try to find a way we could include the sidekick character in our opening sequence.
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